OK, here's my first story.
It's quite long. About 22,500 words, so you'll need a long sitting or to take it in chapters. As the title suggests, there are five days and you could treat them as chapters. Every chapter contains at least something fun.
It's pretty hardcore in the descriptions, but there's also a story, so hopefully something for quite a few (I won't say all, as I know this isn't exactly mainstream!)
There are no illustrations. I would love to have illustrations but have absolutely no skill in that area. If anyone feels inspired and wants to give it a go, please do, and let me know!
All comments very gratefully received
Thanks
http://www.4shared.com/office/iJ4pO8Xx/working_week.html
EDIT: I've been reminded by a commenter that part of this story was partially inspired by a short comic by Blackshirtboy, so I thought I should reference that.
Wow! This was really, really hot. I absolutely loved it. Especially sizzling were the sections where Hannah felt compelled to work for 'upgrades'. Very kinky stuff! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks so much for the comment! I really appreciate your appreciation.
ReplyDeleteWahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!! I have troulbe getting the fie to download. It seems to end in the middle o a scentence...It ends with
ReplyDelete.... “I can't find out
anything about any technology that could have done this” she said, clearly tired
and
Is this the end? If not, then how do I go about getting the rest of the story? Super Hot BTW!!I just want to make sure I have th compete story...
10-Q, Zoe
Sorry! That's definitely not the end. I can't see why it wouldn't be working though. Seems to still work for me.
DeleteI loved this story. I'm not sure if you saw, but Fictionmania went down shortly after you posted the story over there. I don't think the version of the site with your story was backed up so you may want to submit it again. It's a fantastic first story!
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