Conveyor Belt: Story with Images

Hello there. It's been a while.

I've been working on a few stories and have two nearly ready, and one (this one) which I think is finished.

Now, it's quite a dark nasty story (though there's no physical violence, no incest etc, and no non-consensual sex), so please don't read it if that's not your thing.

It's also an experiment style wise. The whole thing is just the protagonists thoughts and words. Everything else is excluded. I think that maybe the style could work if I chose the right story, but I think maybe this one's a little long for the style.

Anyway I present it to you here. I haven't added this to Fictionmania yet because I'm not sure it's good enough, but thought I'd put it here so that those who really want to seek it out can find it. I would very much welcome comments.

Again, it's fairly long, at least in terms of pages, so it's available as a download from 4shared.

http://www.4shared.com/office/Qfiqta2o/Conveyor_Belt.html